[創作] 江城子

alfi2016 09/14 14:05好濕好濕

whitefox 09/14 14:05應該貼在joke板

centaurjr 09/14 14:06最後一句不錯XDD

shihchinlun 09/14 14:07100分

peoplefu556609/14 14:0777慘慘77

jim2011 09/14 14:08最後一句傳神

diamondss 09/14 14:08大少奶奶是不是欣賞你的文彩

CaTkinGG 09/14 14:09詩系列不錯...

sh021515 09/14 14:10押的真好

gourmand 09/14 14:10笑死

jjjjjjs 09/14 14:11啥是 萬長陽

qqdama 09/14 14:11改的真好，文筆佳

yapot 09/14 14:13有喔

a52655 09/14 14:14最後一句畫龍點睛，甲上上

hutten 09/14 14:14最後一句優

iamlittlede 09/14 14:15別來買股票… 被耽誤的文學家

arains 09/14 14:16中文系逆

tomdavis 09/14 14:17你不要買股票了 快去應徵+~老蘇助理幫他想詩

tingover 09/14 14:17XDDDDD

RS512 09/14 14:17最後一句爆擊傷害真高

jasontzymann09/14 14:17萬海長榮陽明

CGDGAD 09/14 14:18明天再寫一篇卜算子

t200830217 09/14 14:18最後一句最棒！

hidecxa 09/14 14:19萬長陽XD

qa1122z 09/14 14:20好濕好濕

poki0818 09/14 14:22好濕好濕，閣下文才非凡，失禁失禁

liago 09/14 14:24強

okah 09/14 14:26意境再深遠也隱藏不了你航黑的味道

chanel1259 09/14 14:26與陽長分離已有十餘周，最難忘的是他的腰斬

windble 09/14 14:26好詩好濕～最後一句真的棒

godartifact 09/14 14:26哭啊

qqdama 09/14 14:27跪求改定風波

jerryjayg 09/14 14:28好煩XDD

ibetitisnot 09/14 14:28好詩 好詩

farming 09/14 14:33跪求長套歌

kevinis0129 09/14 14:34這篇給過

EQUP 09/14 14:36接下來是哪一首 快生出來

ntb3394 09/14 14:36好詩！推

gladopo 09/14 14:40好詩，我詩了

butt1106 09/14 14:41嗯

jimmyid4 09/14 14:44現在大家國文都這麼好就對了

ivan1116 09/14 14:44寫得很好欸 可以投稿了

apple123773 09/14 14:45好詩 好詩

jcto04 09/14 14:53等等三點去應徵老蘇文膽

jerry5020 09/14 15:01濕了一踏糊塗 好詩好詩

jerry5020 09/14 15:02弔念亡妻 變成弔念荷包了 悲痛

truthzero 09/14 15:06好詩

coffee112 09/14 15:11挖靠

HowCouldI 09/14 15:14好傳神

numbtch236 09/14 15:24好詩好詩

rainrein 09/14 15:40二少奶奶有欣賞你的文采嗎

exghost 09/14 16:16太有才

dufflin 09/14 17:09哈哈哈哈 有才了您

marauder08 09/14 17:11最後一句 默默滴了兩滴眼淚

zankuro 09/14 17:16好文采

bagaalo 09/14 17:19好濕！

azhu 09/14 17:42太惆悵 好詩

L2e2o4 09/14 20:12推推 好詩

jodawa 09/14 20:13太黯然太銷魂

oplk 09/14 23:06XDDDDDDDDDDD

angelstephen09/15 01:29濕什麼？這是詞

XDDDpupu556609/15 01:59哇塞股板詞人

miller31 09/16 08:52XD