[問卦] 中文系看這兩首詩英文造詣大概到?有掛否

A.

In the realms of yore, no ancients I trace,
Nor future souls emerge in timeless space,
Amidst vast heavens, my pensive mind strays,
Alone, tears cascade in melancholy haze.

B.

Amidst blossoms, a vessel of wine I find,
Alone, I indulge, no companion assigned.
I raise my cup, inviting the moon's grace,
A trio forms, my shadow takes its place.

In the realm of flowers, a wine-filled shrine,
No one beside, my solace, divine.
To the moon's radiance, I offer my toast,
Three figures emerge, a spectral host.

Through fragrant blooms, my spirits alight,
In solitude, this enchanting night.
As moonlight dances, shadows intertwine,
A sublime trinity, where realms align.

大家覺得呢

以英文語法來看，這兩首詩大概到什麼程度？

0～100可以給幾分？

大家覺得呢

有掛否

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