Re: [閒聊] 用ChatGPT協助寫小說的實作、分析及心得

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我也想分享一個算是簡單的技巧。

之前有來請教過小說該怎麼寫，然後我現在還在雲第二回……

其實寫了大概一半了，但後續我還是沒有進度，希望這個月可以結束吧。

第一回連結：https://memes.tw/story/s/O6xegn/p/6LQ7Kn

然後我在第二回想要引進主角，一個因為厄運連連而慘遭勒令退伍的中尉。

然後我想要讓他加入我的地下摔角團體。

所以我這麼問 ChatGPT：
I'm trying to write a novel about this, but I know little.
Can you help me build up how John, a just-discharged lieutenant,
attends the underground wrestling association?
（a novel about "this" 的 this 是指地下摔角的運作模式，我前面有跟他聊過。）

然後他給了我如下回應：
Sure, here is a rough outline of how John, a just-discharged lieutenant,
might attend an underground wrestling association:

John becomes interested in underground wrestling after watching some videosonline. He is drawn to the raw, intense nature of the matches and the sense
of community among the wrestlers and fans.

He starts following a few underground wrestling federations on social mediaand begins to learn more about the scene. He sees that one federation, called"The Underground Wrestling Association," is hosting an event in his city in afew weeks.

John decides to attend the event and buys a ticket online. He is excited tosee the matches and meet other fans in person.

On the day of the event, John arrives at the venue, which is a small club ina sketchy part of town. He sees a group of wrestlers hanging out outside and
introduces himself. They seem friendly and invite him to hang out with them
before the show starts.

John watches the matches from the front row and cheers on his favorite
wrestlers. He meets other fans and starts to feel like he is part of the
underground wrestling community.

After the event, John talks to one of the wrestlers he met earlier and
expresses his interest in getting involved in underground wrestling. The
wrestler introduces him to the promoter of the federation, who is impressed
with John's background and athleticism.

John starts training with the federation and makes his debut at a future
event. He quickly becomes a popular wrestler and starts to make a name for
himself in the underground wrestling scene.

嗯，可以。非常可以。可是我還想修改一些地方。所以我繼續要求：
I'd like it be more dramatical. How to make John wrestle on the day he just
get discharged?

這次的回應真的很戲（超）劇（展）性（開），
因為他直接讓某個傢伙被 KO，然後讓男主角頂替上場！？？？

所以我再次要求：
Modify the story with the following character set of John:
1. John was discharged from military since he made great mistakes (due to his bad luck).
2. John is strong and is skilled in boxing.
3. John is unyielding, stubborn and loyal.
和：
Modify the script by the following story: In the intermission, John goes to
the bathroom and he is so excited that he starts shadow boxing. Meanwhile,
"The Rebel" rushes into the bathroom, and John knocks out "The Rebel" by
accident so that "The Rebel" could not continue wrestling.

總之流程就是他幫我補滿細節，我再告訴他怎麼一點一點修。

最後我是要求他寫成小說了：
Rewrite this story as a novel. You may use dialogues to shape the
characteristics of the characters. Remember that the opponent of John in the
wrestling match is named Mark, short but very talented. Mark is both skillfuland powerful. Mark is also careless so that he made a bad call and lost the
farm many times.

之後又追加了後續故事的發展方向，就把整個故事大致敲定了。

很方便的地方是，有時候對於某些劇情開怎麼展開會不確定，因為我就是不懂。

想辦法找了資料來學習，但進度緩慢又不知道何時到頭。

這時候讓他幫忙掰點故事就不錯。

上面大致上做了：

1. 設定角色。在這段故事中夠用就好，所以不要太詳細。

2. 決定故事結局。

3. 如果故事偏離所想可以重骰，或加入新設定再聊一次。

最後的結果其實讓我頗為滿意，我只要用他當底，再用中文好好改寫一番就好。

可能有人會說那我幹麼不直接讓他寫我的小說。

我就想用自己的文字表達嘛！

而且比賽流程我也是要重來的。

之前讓 ChatGPT 設計的比賽流程幾乎都差不多，我膩了。

自己設計比較嗨。

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誒……就是這樣。

我有讓他寫過，可是一下簡體一下支語的，有點無奈。 然後文字方面也是略顯生硬，畢竟我不知道該讓他模仿怎樣的文風來寫我要的小說。